Wednesday, September 19, 2012

An A+ is more than just effort


After reading through tons of blogs it is clear not me that I definitely need to redo my home page mine seems so boring in comparison to most. I loved reading everyone’s blogs they were all so well written and interesting. I think I enjoyed looking at the titles of the posts the most. It was interesting to see how people pulled the readers in, it was also a good insight into the creativity of the writers. Out of all the blogs there were a bunch I loved but only a few stood out.

Although I don’t know much about grading a blog I feel that the blog titled Next Generation deserves an A+ it is beautifully written and the pictures are a great touch. The way she makes her sentences flow seem effortless. All of the posts are interesting but I especially liked the post about her hardship in life titled One word: Optimism. I enjoyed reading this one because I felt a great sense of compassion it takes a very strong person to not only deal with the death of a close family member but also act as a fill in parent. One of my other favorite pieces she wrote was the post about the club fair, it had a sense of humor in it when she said “they didn’t have to ask me twice to put my name down” taking about the photography booth and it didn’t feel like she was just blabbing on about nonsense it felt like she was having a conversation with me.

Everyone has done a great job with their blogs. So many have their own personalities and they are all very interesting.   It is easy to tell that most people have put in a lot of time and effort into these assignments. Over all I feel that Venice definitely deserves an A+ for her blog. She made it fun, relatable, all of her posts are written very well and most of all I highly enjoyed reading it!

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